I like it. I'm not going to reply tonight because I already wrote something to day and I'm not proud of it to be honest, but it's been acknowledged so I'll keep it there. So is Grace going to stay asleep all the time? I have this horrible idea to have Townsend screw with her mind instead of jumping to what Cat wants him to do. Dang me...
@Maiden: No that's awesome that you did that! I like what your hinting at with the experimentation, I think we might have to through Locke and the Ghost for a loop. As for Rinn... well she's going to continue being a blonde (no offense) freaked out by everything and possible run into a very scary cat.
I think she might need to take a breather first so she's going to head outside.
@Everyone: Finishing up the draft now. It should be up at some point soon. :-)
@Ryel: Anything I write in italic is either a thought or a dream. However, Elsa does speak when she has dreams-flashbacks, though this time she does so in Italian. Just thought I'd let you know.
@pumirya: I picked that up from Elsa and Zacky's miss adventures so I thought that would add a bit insight as well as humor to my scene
@Ryel: That's cool :-) and nice post. I like the little details you put in like checking the pulse, etc. I actually redid mine a few times before the latter haft felt right.
Oh, Marizy, LoL, her hands. Those are Jean Lisette's hands stitched onto Jeanette's body... they're pretty much the same corpse color... but she likes them 'cuz they're still hers. Sorry about any confusion.
Meh! I want to catch up on reading but I've only made it like halfway through Pum's post before I get interrupted. XD I'll have to read later, but I should be able to get another reply up tonight! Yays! ^_^
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