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Thread: Devil Never Cry: A DmC Tribute

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    Am interested in this and got my CS done.

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    Done with Bob. Take a look and see what is need to be fixed.
    "Somehow you strayed and lost your way, and now there'll be no time to play, no time for joy, no time for friends - not even time to make amends. You are too naïve if you do believe life is just innocent laughter and fun." ~ Cheshire Cat




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    I'm actually having a crazy hard time trying to get my ideas together, gonna have to give me a little longer, I have this assignment to do >.<

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    Arashi, looks good, though I'd suggest adding a connection to the church.

    SouLMaster, add more to the personality and change the name. I feel like you're not taking this seriously when you name your charrie, "Bob." Humor is fine, but this is not a joke. Also, there is no Devil.

    That's perfectly fine, Blazinfire.

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    Done.
    "Somehow you strayed and lost your way, and now there'll be no time to play, no time for joy, no time for friends - not even time to make amends. You are too naïve if you do believe life is just innocent laughter and fun." ~ Cheshire Cat




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    Name: Valerie

    Age: 30

    Gender: Female

    Personality: Relaxed in all things, casual to the point of seeming careless, rather friendly -in many ways, and doesn't mind helping out -also in many ways, so she's overall a fairly pleasant individual if a tad awkward to be around.
    She's one to love playing around and isn't afraid to be seductive, though generally speaking she's more of a business-type woman who prefers serious fun. It's kind of part of what makes her seem less human, lacking several typical human restraints about modesty and privacy and such, and really only resorts to lying and such if actually necessary.
    At times however, she seems to demonstrate and surprising amount of wisdom however rare or often that may be, so as much as she seems flippant and too relaxed, there must be some kind of rationality behind her.

    Fighting Style: Improv Artist, think of a fighting style that was the product of a juggler, a baton dancer, an acrobat and probably a freerunner as well all thrown into the mix.
    She's just as likely to kill someone with the tip of the sword as use the pommel in an elaborate twirl to brain someone, or to wield her sword with either hand as much as juggle it with her feet every so often.
    Heck she might even kick spent shell casings into your face, there's no real system and no-holds-barred to her method.

    She treats her weapons as acrobatic aides as much weapons, as she could be gripping them by the hilt or the blade or be flinging them into the air extravagantly.
    Her movements in combat are just as erratic, as she mostly does little dances or acrobatic performances, and often leaping off/destroying/utilising the environment to her advantage.
    But her combat style kind of relies on her obscene flexibility and respectable balance and coordination, as her footwork and movements in general are very if not overly elaborate in orchestration.

    Magic:

    Weapons:
    An exceptionally ornate/elaborate bastard sword with a lengthy hilt, the blade alone being a little over four feet, and the hilt two feet. The cross-guard is almost non-existent, extending only an inch on either side of the blade, though there are two large ring-like holes embedded in the hilt, one on either side of the blade wide enough to permit a finger or two.
    The sword in general looks like a relic, something to be used for ornamental purposes only, except it holds its own in combat very well.

    She also possesses a similarly elaborate shotgun that more resembles an unnaturally straight rifle with pump-action functionality and a lot more metal bedecking its form as if to be used to parry and overall make it look ornamental in nature.
    Single-barrel, narrow for long range firing, unnaturally straight as in the rifle butt is seated directly behind the chamber, a 7-shot semi-auto-pistol-style mag is loaded in from below at an angle toward the grip embedded amongst the mass of metal about the weapon.

    Her gauntlets most likely classify as weapons as much as armour, with flawlessly interlocking plates, fairly bulky to carry a decent impact, the fingers are tipped mostly like claws but not so much as to severely hinder finger-dexterity.

    Augmentations: Speed, just an overall increase, displays itself more in the form of fluidity as though she's had more time to contemplate each individual movement she makes, which makes it seem like she's going a lot faster, when in terms of raw speed she's only a little better.

    Species: Half-Breed

    Looks:
    5'11'', 140lbs, Valerie has light brown skin and a respectably honed muscular frame but it hardly dominates her features, still maintaining a curvaceous feminine form.
    Her demonic heritage is displayed through her hair and eyes; she's let her voluminous snow-white hair grow absurdly long, reaching just passed the back of her knees though she keeps it fairly tamed with a large length of material tying it into a pony-tail.
    Her eyes are technically blue but have streaks of red about them which gives an overall violet tone to them from a distance, though easier to notice the colour difference when closer.

    For clothing, a simple black tank-top and faded black cargo pants with long, highly flexible black boots. She'll have her gauntlets on and don a light plate attachment to her boots, a belt around her waist and around low on her left thigh holds the holster on the left side of her hip for her gun, and she'll have a compact backpack belted on around her torso with a pair of straps between the pack and her back to hold her sword.
    The backpack holds base necessities like spare ammo.

    History:
    Valerie had a slightly interesting upbringing, due to having a human mother and a demonic father, complications were surprisingly few except for one significant event.
    At first Valerie was primarily raised by her mother for about 7-8 years, Valerie's father, Tyron was constantly at work beating down demonic agents to keep the district they lived in safe, but unfortunately one day his work followed him home, and was assailed by a dozen demonic agents.
    No one was entirely sure what their goal was, attacking Tyron in his own home, as they were swiftly obliterated but Valerie's mother, Constance became collateral damage in the crossfire of the warzone they had made.

    Tyron went into hiding with Valerie for several years after that catastrophe, having difficulty getting over the guilt with his daughter around but it wasn't like he could afford to leave her out of selfish desire. He convinced himself his daughter blamed him for Constance's death, and part of him was too deep in mourning to really clear his mind about that, as Valerie never truly showed anger or hate toward her father.
    It was a strange relationship, but they survived, what with Tyron dispatching the odd devil here and there for money, often bringing his daughter along just to keep an eye on her, eventually teaching her the basics of combat just so she could protect herself in the event he failed again.

    Unfortunately matters only stagnated between father and daughter, as Tyron failed to move even slightly out of his mourning and guilt due to the feelings perpetuating themselves, and Valerie had little idea of how to help hence she never really brought up the subject, so nothing ever changed.

    But even though their relationship was gloomy, Valerie often got involved in the events all about the town they resided in, joining circuses whilst they were in town and often playing about running around rooftops and such, and often joining in on the festivals and performances that happened often.
    Tyron simply let her do as she pleased, almost afraid of her response if he had of tried otherwise, so he simply guarded from the shadows gaining the shred of happiness he could out of knowing at least his daughter was happy doing these things.

    So for about 8 years she had learned what it was like to be a human, and for the next 16 she grew as a demon since that was all Tyron knew, when she finally reached an age where Tyron was confident she could defend herself as well as he could, he directed her to a Church while he himself went in exile to perhaps recover.

    Phobias*: Almost comically, she has an irrational fear of spiders even though the average spider couldn't harm her if it tried.

    Best/worst qualities*: Valerie is usually brilliant soldier material in being able to thoughtlessly follow orders, though she definitely has her moments which can get her into trouble. At the very least her moments aren't always spontaneous and can often have a compromise, as she is usually easy to persuade into doing anything.

    Skills*: Her fighting style owes a lot to her ability as an acrobat, dancer and as a freerunner, though asides from that she's fairly limited, though she's quite handy in a kitchen as she's rather fond of good food.

    Vices*: Quite the adrenaline junkie, hence absurd challenges, obstacle courses and almost anything that gets her blood pumping is something she's absolutely addicted to.

    Quirks*: Lacks modesty and restraint, possessing little human anxiety so she can be quite awkward as she may do anything from leaning casually on a total stranger from walking half-naked through an occupied house to get herself some clothes.

    Other*:
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    Looks good you two.

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    Alright, I added the part you suggested in mine.

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    Great.

    Incidently, Denarii is plural. Denarius is singular. Just for the record.

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