Rupdeus, it's nice to have a new player. If I may make a suggestion- expand your sentences a little. Your character woke up. (What did he see? How did he feel? What were his thoughts?) He walked around. (Is he stiff from being in stasis? Do his knuckles drag on the metal floor because he's so huge?) Little details like that can take you from bland to awesome, and you don't need paragraphs to do it.