Stop intentionally miswording things, I study literature because I intend to write a novel. Stop trying to slip things past me because it won't work.

Orsa, I reviewed your sheet.

[hider=Uber Tylenol]
[list]
[*]Starting at the very top of his list is your usage of the word: "Full Power." That immediately puts up a red flag, as Skallagrim stated when Samuel was first posted as an active character. This implies that they're holding something back, making every single fight beyond point of entry, technically unfair.[/*]
[*]So he can manipulate the ambient temperature of the air around him in a two mile area? Let's do the calculations on that. To freeze ambient water, you have to be beneath freezing point by a substantial amount. Hail is formed from ambient air temp at -13 degrees. Frostbite starts at 0 degrees celsius. Very few characters have resistance to this. And you can influence an area of 2 km to be this cold? That would have to be your SOLE ability to be acceptable. Combined with the note of: "It will not break unless he wills it to." We all know that his willpower is remarkable, meaning that this ice won't break. Full stop.[/*]
[*]Telepathy, as long as it is not a manipulative ability, is an acceptable power. As long as you can't read minds, influence decisions, et cetera.[/*]
[*]Orsanian Telekinesis is able to reach at least 2 kilometers from his standing position. I picked up on that immediately. If his thermokinesis is capable of attaining that range, his telekinesis would reach at least that far as well. Moving on. You actually STATE that he has a range of approximately 10 miles. This power level is so high that I don't even need to finish reading this power to tell you no.[/*]
[*]Teleporting projectiles away from yourself? Really? I can't accept this.[/*]
[*]Combat ability is based on the writer's ability, saying your character has profound martial arts and then writing out: "Karate chop." Does not Mister Miyagi make. Oh, and you neglected to mention his physical strength, speed, et cetera.[/*]
[*]The sword is fine, but really, that's the only thing fine on this CS.[/*]
[/list]
[/hider]

Please tell me you didn't expect this to get in. Please.