TheUnknowable, thanks for that, just wanted to make sure it was memory rub you were referring to. Please edit a short version of mind rub's description into your main sheet.

Assallya, I'm not sure if your character is complete, as the History section seems like it's a bit of a cliffhanger. I may be reading too much into it. In the case that Vindica is complete on your end, she's accepted on mine. There was one point of confusion though, but I feel this was probably just a typo or something similar. Under Force Powers, it says her telekinesis is easy to resist but then lists the power a second time after discussing the ephemeral abilities. Is the latter mention simply a list of all of Vindica's abilities?

FoxFired, glad to have you, and I can't wait to see what you come up with! Nice pictures you've got, by the way.