[quote=Lillium]
Looks okay to me^^@ToawI just read your biography and while it is very well written, I'm sorry to ask you to remove that bit about him and his sister playing SAO, at least for the time being. We'll be starting the IC on day one of the game, moment's after it's begun. You can describe the incidents in your first post/ first few posts if you'd like.
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I edited it to fit the story-line better, and as much as I liked the idea of my biography went with some a bit different. Please point out things, as I was very tired when I remade my Bio.