[quote=Assallya] Unknowable, let me know what you think about the addition to the end of Vindica's biography and see if there's anything there you object to. Kurai, might also want to look into this, just in case.Also, is it me, or does Rin look decidedly non-human? She definitely looks Chiss to me. [/quote] "Vindica tortured the woman and pleasured her and occasionally did both at the same time." Well, I never thought Keffa would be into women, but, I don't think she cares either. Anything to help her advance, especially if it puts her in a position to learn the most intimate secrets about her enemies. I say we keep it, even if that wasn't what you intended by that. It makes the story more interesting.