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Blazion said
I am just lazy. I've been trying to get gold in League instead. :c SOMEDAY.


Already beat you to it.

Teehee.
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Fite me IRL I just lost my gold promos. :P
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Blazion said
Fite me IRL I just lost my gold promos. :P


Aw, that kinda sucks. Lol.

BUT BRING IT, SON. D:<
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Pfft, classic is for chumps, ARAM ERDAY SLOOTS
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So, what nao?
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OK, does anyone who I haven't already spoken with/that hasn't carried over from the old Caelbury want a specific kind of relationship to Eliza (I already know she'll be dating Spooner's character, Max, for instance)? Does anyone want to change what their relationship to her was from the first one?

Let me know; I'll be doing her RS soon.
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I sort of thought Eliza and Connor could be friends, get their drank on together?
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Seems a tad...hard for me, I think I'll stay off and observe a few more CS.
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Blazion said
Fite me IRL I just lost my gold promos. :P


there there.....it can be a bit difficult getting out from silver without a duo partner *pats*
same as to gold
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Insatiable said
there there.....it can be a bit difficult getting out from silver without a duo partner *pats*same as to gold


</3

I'm gonna sex Alex up just for that. GONNA TIE HIM DOWN, SON.

GONNA MAKE HIM LOVE IT, SO IT'S NOT RAPE.
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Dear god Dx I don't know what to put on my Relationship thing.....I can already see Sixsmiths character in a very odd way XD
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Ozerath said
I sort of thought Eliza and Connor could be friends, get their drank on together?


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AliceZaru said
Snip~


Hey Alice, thanks for your interest but I'm unable to accept your character for a few reasons.

First, we prefer all character applications via PM. It helps clear out the already cluttered OOC a bit.

As stated in the OP, we aren't accepting any more seniors, and even then, Alyssa's age doesn't add up. It would be impossible for her to be in 12th grade as a 15 year old without skipping a few grades. Also, if her birthday is on May 7th, 1997 she would be 17 years old.

Second, "commoner" wouldn't be her social class. She would fit in gifted, if anything, but even then, I'm having a hard time believing that she has never lost a game. A commoner would not skip two grades, one would even be a stretch. Alyssa is way too smart in an unrealistic way. Chess champions have to train their way to foresee their opponent's moves, to understand how to counter them. Even a genius would lose a few games, especially their first.

Alyssa is also a little too flat in terms of personality. So she plays games, she's way too good at them. So what? The only impression that I get from her is that she's a genius gamer whom everyone hates. There's no how, or why, and again, I think that its a bit unrealistic.

Finally, there's various grammatical errors and such throughout the entire CS which makes it hard to read. It make me question whether you will fit the 'high-casual' standard that I hold for this RP. I'm not a grammar nazi, but I do require good grammar to make things easier to read and comprehend.
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Sixsmith said
</3I'm gonna sex Alex up just for that. GONNA TIE HIM DOWN, SON.GONNA MAKE HIM LOVE IT, SO IT'S NOT RAPE.


Some of your characters would make that even creepier
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Sixsmith said
</3I'm gonna sex Alex up just for that. GONNA TIE HIM DOWN, SON.GONNA MAKE HIM LOVE IT, SO IT'S NOT RAPE.


*runs away* DDDDD:
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Ozerath said
Some of your characters would make that even creepier


Is this about Flynn?

Because I will neither confirm nor deny that he would do that. So hard.

I like to keep an air of mystery, you know. Give people something to be mortified surprised at.
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Sixsmith said
Is this about Flynn?Because I will neither confirm nor deny that he would do that. So hard.I like to keep an air of mystery, you know. Give people something to be surprised at.


Remember the conversation we had in Atreus concerning Hades and Persephone....? X_x
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Mizuho said
Remember the conversation we had concerning Hades and Persephone....? X_x


I don't, but it probably had something to do with Flynn, since he was originally a son of Hades.

I mean, I dunno if he'd totally do that, but he's lovable, so I mean... I don't see why he would have to? Maybe if he became super obsessed with a straight guy *cough*Comac*cough* then who knows?
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It seems to me that the teachers lack older-looking ones. I might make one in the future If you're still in need of them.
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Mizuho said
Hey Alice, thanks for your interest but I'm unable to accept your character for a few reasons.First, we prefer It helps clear out the already cluttered OOC a bit.As stated in the OP, we aren't accepting any more seniors, and even then, Alyssa's age doesn't add up. It would be impossible for her to be in 12th grade as a 15 year old without skipping a few grades. Also, if her birthday is on May 7th, 1997 she would be 17 years old.Second, "commoner" wouldn't be her social class. She would fit in gifted, if anything, but even then, I'm having a hard time believing that she has never lost a game. A commoner would skip two grades, one would even be a stretch. Alyssa is way too smart in an unrealistic way. Chess champions have to train their way to foresee their opponent's moves, to understand how to counter them. Even a genius would lose a few games, especially their first. Alyssa is also a little too flat in terms of personality. So she plays games, she's way too good at them. So what? The only impression that I get from her is that she's a genius gamer whom everyone hates. There's no how, or why, and again, I think that its a bit unrealistic.Finally, there's various grammatical errors and such throughout the entire CS which makes it hard to read. It make me question whether you will fit the 'high-casual' standard that I hold for this RP. I'm not a grammar nazi, but I do require good grammar to make things easier to read and comprehend.


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