[quote= The Jest] @TheRpgGamer: ...I'm going to be honest, I can't accept the CS as it is right now. To put simply as to why: The Personality's not exactly detailed, and doesn't really fit the Hanged Man Arcana that well, the Grammar needs to be properly fixed, the two attacks besides Maragi, while are SMT abilities, aren't abilities from Persona, and needs to be changed, (Here's the lists of skills from Persona 3 and Persona 4 to help you out.) and Unless cooking is a MAJOR aspect of his life, the character relevance can't work well. [/quote] Ok i edited the CS and change his arcana and persona and thank you for that moves list I was currently playing Devil Survivor 2 that's why Weak Kill and Fire Dance there --- Human: Name: Kouichi Kihara Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: [img]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-NIv5AxGAqps/UCkmN1rK7JI/AAAAAAAAAgY/wZCaQrO-Ud0/s400/Child-Boy-velsea-supporters-.gif[/img] Attire: he is not choosy with clothes as long as it fits his style. Arcana: Hermit Weapon: Scythe Personality: Kouichi often has his head in the clouds and can make light of serious situations. He's laid back and lazy, however he will come to someone's aid when he sees them in trouble. Despite his outer expression, he seems to have a surprising amount of wisdom and insight. Theme Song: Devil Survivor 2 Opening - Take Your Way by Livetune [youtube]W_ZXidH4XbE[/youtube] Devil Survivor 2 Ending - Be by Song Riders [youtube]QzZsWKqn27k[/youtube] --- Persona: Persona Name: Kapre [i]Kapre is a philippine mythological creature.He is a bigfoot but he lives in the forest.Kapre likes to smoke a cigar and stays in one place[/i] Persona Appearance:[url=http://cryptidz.wikia.com/wiki/Kapre] Persona Skills:Agi,Swift Strike,Bash Physical -Strong Fire - Reflect Ice - Weakness Wind - Neutral Lightning - Neutral Darkness - Neutral Light - Neutral Character Relevance: Kapre is very lazy like Kouichi because he just stays in one place smoking his cigar to scare people