[quote=Emuxe] Don't worry Pudding, it's cause your post is mostly dialogue. I feel that I must applaud you for obeying the rules of writing unlike what many people do. I have a feeling that when there's more action and thought processes, it'll look like the others. :3 [/quote] Huehue, thanks! Can't wait until I become a pro~ ;-; @Anomaly Yeaaaah, my plan is that he's too immature to understand those "grown up" feelings, if you catch my drift. But he'll marry when the time is right. That'll be a looong time though.