Wow, polar opposite of Griselda, as far as I can tell. Like her.
Just so we're clear, all the pokemon DJ has used are rentals, correct? As in, she doesn't actually have any of her own?

And Sparx, I won't be giving much feedback on your CS until your finished, since as far as I can tell you've barely started.

EDIT: Actually, I do have to thank you for indirectly pointing out a flaw in what I've written. This rp really couldn't take place a year after the events of X and Y, due to a few details about Professor Willow. Lemme fix that.