I wasn't judging your characters - I knew they were incomplete. Advice is just advice and all. The same kind I got when I first posted in here, the same anybody gets in collaborative writing. I was doing my best to be helpful, and apologies if I came off a bit too strong with it. I see you did raise their Generations, so thank you for taking my suggestions to heart.

Although, when you say "contacts with the Underworld," do you mean the criminal underworld or the Shadowlands?