[quote=TheDoctor]
OK, started my Jedi knight and just need to finish history. Was my other character accepted?
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-facepalm- I knew there was something I was forgetting.

[quote=TheDoctor]
Awesome, just made one character minus the history! If I want to make a Jedi Knight do I need to have someone make a padawan to keep up the ratio? Or, since there's no active masters can I just make one of those?Name: Conrad ThrainAge: 26Gender: MaleSpecies: Human (Born on Wayland)Appearance:Skills: Piloting, hand-to-hand combat, interrogation, and climbing.Weapons: Blaster pistol and sniper rifleOther Equipment: Datapad, slicer, comms device, and grappling hook.History: Conrad Thrain was born on the isolated far rim planet Wayland from workers of the Republic who were workers for maintenance of the storage that were placed on the planet. Obviously the planet was not meant for raising a child so Conrad's parents had themselves relocated within a few years and eventually found a good home on Fondor. Unfortunately the family was always struggling and eventually went into debt. Wanting to help his parents, Conrad as a 14 year old started doing work for underground organizations and quickly learned how dangerous the galaxy really was. The boy nearly lost his life several times and figured he should start learning how to survive this cruel world. He eventually learned all he could through others who would give him tips. By the age of 18 Conrad had learned a lot and was even considering to take up bounty hunting as a profession. The consideration ended quickly though as his family's debt went too far and his mother was kidnapped one night. Determined to find her, Conrad searched through all the underground networks on Fondor, but all his leads went dry. Finally, after his father's constant begging, Conrad gave up searching and the two moved off the planet, constantly travelling and working together.When the Clone Wars began by the time Conrad was 23, him and his father decided that their time would be best spent away from the war. Because of this decision they traveled throughout outer rim planets and picked up work when they could. Determined that the war would someday catch up to them though Conrad still practiced on his fighting skills and kept his weapons up to date. Conrad's beliefs proved correct two years later when the station they were on was boarded by separatists who were out to locate a Jedi onboard the station. After a day went by with no results, the separatists became more angry and searched more aggressively. Conrad thought they went too far when they started threatening his father on suspicious items, and when two battle droids aimed their weapons Conrad knew they crossed the line and pulled out his own pistol. His father yelled "NO" as Conrad shot both droids. Alarms blared and they began running. Determined to get off the station Conrad headed for a hangar with his father. When they were almost there, the droids surrounded them and things weren't looking good. At that moment the Jedi revealed himself and destroyed the droids surrounding Conrad and his dad. The three ran to the hangar as more droids came and fired. Conrad's father was hit and fell to the ground right as they reached a ship. Unable to go back for him, Conrad was forced to leave with the Jedi. Heartbroken, Conrad sobbed for hours, blaming himself for his father's loss.As Conrad finally spoke with the Jedi he learned more about the Republic and the Jedi order which interested him. He became great friends with the Jedi for the next six months and assisted him on several missions. Finally, when the war seemed over Conrad was going to meet up with his Jedi friend when he suddenly heard shots nearby. Running to the scene Conrad saw several clones standing over his friend's body. Outraged, Conrad fired upon the clones and was almost killed but barely got away. Conrad escaped to his ship and took off, quickly leaving the system and looking for other survivors
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Looks nice, not the best combat guy doesn't seem over powered in the slightest so far. A lot of personal turmoil and knows his limits. My kinda guy. Feel free to post up.

[quote=Darkmarshall]
Flame Gauntlets.Sorry, I meant a personal Holo-projector.He mostly trained himself, though he did pay for some instructors to teach him melee combat and shooting. He's not actually that good at being a warrior, the only thing he is above average in is his accuracy with his pistols. He started out doing small things, such as stopping thieves and such, but he soon got the hang of dealing with more complex situations. He picked up his best friend Jacarni on Tatooine while dealing with a distress call from some locals about someone stealing their landspeeder. One of the locals, this being Jacarni, offered to help him get it back. From then on they haven't separated. Harasho also has his protocol droid C-6TX who he bought on on Tatooine not long after, who he adores. He didn't go with Yoda due to 1: Yoda was very far away, he was looking through his binoculars. 2: His friends were still on his ship and were expecting him to pilot them out of the battle, therefore he had to go back. He wanted to help, but couldn't.
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Add this stuff into the CS and you're good. It was just stuff missing from the history that needed to be put in.