[quote=racoonman] Wow that's a lot of early feedback! Thank you! I never said I was going to have no powers haha. I fully intended him to be metahuman, I'll take note of keeping the gore down, I don't want to be a cheap rorschach knock off! Yeah I see that serial killers would generally be bad rep for the organisation. [/quote] You're welcome. But I am sorry, I do have a tendency to write a lot haha. I am also sorry for my preconceived notions about your character, just for some reason in roleplays the cynical types are almost aways also non-powered lol. And thank you for keeping it in mind, I don't want you to not have fun but I also want these characters to be played as 'realistically' as they could be. However, at some point in the future (if this takes off) I'll let players roleplay more 'grey' or even full-on 'dark' villain-types to contrast with the heroes. I look forward to your ideas for a character! [quote=MatParker1711] I'm in and have some ideas [/quote] Thank you very much for your interest. May I inquire about these ideas? [quote=BlackSam3091] Yeah, that works for me. In fact I would probably write him as the Nightwing to Pariah's Batman, a former sidekick who's 'graduated'. [/quote] I'm glad it works for you. That's actually an excellent idea and I look forward to roleplaying the Mentor/Student type relationship. Also keep in mind that no hero, powered or not should be awesome at everything. Pariah won't be as omni-competent as the comics Batman and is more like the DCAU or Dark Knight Batman. Zenith, the Superman type isn't as overpowered as Superman often is in the comics. Having someone be good at every thing you can think of is uninteresting. But I anticipate your ideas for your character! At some point I'll start working on character sheets for the major NPC heroes to provide the basis for all your sheets and an OOC. But for now, I await at least two or three more hands on deck. But recruitment into this thread is pretty much Unlimited, so come one come all.