BB said
Gaiz, we sort of forgot to mention, we are in the nineties so act accordingly in regards to technology level and such.

Wait...retro Magical Girls? Le gasp! :O

BB said
Gaiz, we sort of forgot to mention, we are in the nineties so act accordingly in regards to technology level and such.

YEAH! All those hard years training to be a 90's kid ( Also known as 'growing up in the 90's ) will finally pay off!

Gaiz it's probably best to make your magical girls a bit younger, as being 16 or so takes them out of the magical girl prime years.

Alrighty, fixed. Now my character is an oppai loli

Fixed my characters age as well! :)

Thank all of you, for being so flexible. I love the look of this so far, and I'm going to be giving my official views on each character sometime tomorrow. Look forward to it~!

-Your lovely GM,
Tatsua Aiisen.

Ok, edited the age and also changed the images for regular and Magical Girl outfits.

Appearance:

Basically, the short teal hair, red eyes, and dark skin, she wears normal clothes like her school uniform. She is a bit on the short, loli side.

Name: Shizuka Margarete Otonashi (静 マルガレーテ 音無, by order of first, middle and last name as is the convention in Germany)

Age: 11

Personality: Shizuka is a genius through effort. Though she does not posses what people would consider 'genius-levels of raw talent' she does possess some inherent talent which she combines with a relentless determination to crush those who would consider themselves her 'betters'. Through hard work, she can surpass those who are 'inherently smarter' than her, while her own inherent intelligence gives her a tremendous edge against those with less intelligence than her. In this way, she has risen to the top in all academic fields and is considered a wunderkind though she knows that the truth is that she is not a true prodigy in the traditional sense. She is highly analytical and critical, often emotionless and objective to hide the jealous and competitive rage she harbors against anyone who might threaten her position.

Hopes and Dreams~: Above all, Shizuka wishes to be heard, to gain recognition and respect for her achievements. In actuality she simply wants to be loved and accepted unconditionally, without having to work for approval.

Equipment:
-Several different language dictionaries
-Textbooks covering a wide range of subjects
-A white Atlas Beetle plushie named Amadeus

History: Born in Germany to a Japanese father and German mother she is the fourth child, with three brothers before her. As the children were raised, the younger children piggybacked on the knowledge of the older children, allowing the younger ones to learn at an accelerated rate. The family was upper middle class, but the ghost of consumerism made the parents believe themselves to be poor, so they pushed their children to excel in academics, seeing it as the only way their children could increase their wealth. Shizuka's eldest brother was smart in his own right, but quickly became overshadowed by the achievements of his younger siblings. Crushed, demoralized, and disillusioned, he rebelled against his parents' way of life, ultimately resulting in the father throwing him out of the house and disowning him. Shizuka was very young when this happened and came to believe that how much one was loved was entirely dependent on one's academic performance, a sort of educational meritocracy. One who could not achieve did not deserve love, love had to be earned. Not only love, but respect, status and power. Knowledge and academics thus became her obsession, every achievement she gained allowed her to be showered with admiration and attention, and in the same vein as her parents and their want of wealth, it wasn't enough, it was never enough. She had to have more; more recognition, more fame. it came as no surprise then, that she was invited to the exclusive all-girls Hinamizawa Academy in Japan. She bid her parents and two brothers farewell, heading to the airport by herself by taxi. Before leaving, she met up one last time with her eldest brother who was still trying to make his way in the world who had come to the airport to see her off.

Soul Colour: Purple

Magical Girl Appearance:

Some slight modifications to the above image are that her hair color should be teal, but her eyes change to purple in magical girl form. Skin color should be darker, ignore the text, and ignore the handheld weapons as Shizuka possesses no plasma rifle or stun blade. Shizuka is also a bit more covered up and doesn't show that much skin or underboob (if underboobs even exist for flat-chested lolis). Imagine her outfit to be more along the lines of the image shown previously with the sleeveless white dress. Mainly, I want to keep the circular array that floats behind her since it looks like a sound system.

Nickname: (None yet, though she might adopt "Maneshitsugumi" "Spottdrossel", or "Mockingbird" in the future) Never call her Maru-chan

Magic: Her magic revolves around detection, waves, sound, and music. She can send out sonc pings to locate enemies as well as scan and analyze a system for potential weaknesses. She can also use these pings to determine the resonant frequency of various objects and then project that frequency to shatter the object like a wine glass, though depending on the material, she might not have enough power output to destroy it. She mainly uses music, which has a profound effect on the psyche, to give her allies temporary stat boosts; otherwise she tells her allies what weaknesses, if any, she has discovered in the enemy if she is unable to exploit thew weakness herself.

Currently working on my app!

I feel bad for Shizuka, she's completely outside of her element and unsuitable for being a magical girl. Intelligence doesn't get you anywhere as a magical girl, it's all about magic.

I like her name. Its a statement for someone to "be quiet" lol

Ps Currently started Madoka Magica series <3

Name:Mako Mankanskoku Hajime Ichinose Miki Ueno

Age: 14

Appearance:

Personality: Many mistake Miki to be younger than she truely is, given her exuberant attitude and limtied stature ( standing only about 4'10''). Miki is an optimistic, energetic, and often times silly girl. She has a lot of energy and she seems to channel it into everything she does, Miki is never a girl to do anything half way. She likes to make others smile, so if you're a gloomy sort of person expect a great deal of encounters with this energetic young woman.

Hopes and Dreams~: To find a place in life where she can make everyone around her smile.

Equipment:
Bento box always filled with some manner of homemade lunch; and always enough to share with someone.
Colored paper for orogami
nunchuks, don't bother asking why she keeps them around, she'll never tell.

History: Miki is the only child of a the Police Chief of Hinamizawa. When she as 5 years old Her mother was driving her to another Childs birthday when a car accident tragically took her mother's life and the sight in Miki's left eye. For a very long time after that Miki was herself a quiet and gloomy child, one who would hardly ever leave her room or say a word to anyone. Not classmates, not teachers, not even her father. It was only through the various efforts of her father that Miki was pulled from her gray slump and became the bright childe we see today.

Soul Colour: Green

Magical Girl Appearance:

Nickname: Hana no Shinobi (Shinobi of Flowers, or Flower Shinobi ), other magical girls tend to call her Hanano for short.

Magic: Miki's main tool is her massive flower brush as seen in the above picture. It makes for an effective close combat weapon, and despite it's size she wealds it as easily as one would wield a light staff. Green light is emitted from the flower that makes up this tip of this brush when swung as if painting in the air. it fades away in seconds and is harmless to all normal living things, but is harmful to corrupted or negative souls (AKA: whatever evil force we are facing ). When she uses her brush to draw on the ground the green color lingers and from that she can summon forth plants; Mighty trees to act of defense or creeping vines to ensnare a foe for example. She can manipulate the summoned plant life in a limited fashion, not able to make it do much that would be physically impossible for the plant in question ( Can't have a full grown, massive oak tree bend over for example) All plant life summoned disappears if she is rendered

While she is Hanano, she appears to get ninja like speed and agility, as well as other fantastical shinobi like feats like standing or running along walls. Though for all anyone knows, Miki is actually capable of doing that outside of her magical girl form.

@Tatsua Aiisen - Yeah, Shizuka's magical strength doesn't come from her intelligence, at least not directly. Her strength comes from having certainty, a knowledge-related concept that has emotional equivalents, namely faith or creed. She has a very strong belief system, she believes in what she knows, and believes that the things she doesn't know are ultimately knowable. This is directly seen in her sonic scan ability that lets her detect weaknesses, exploitables and flaws in her opponents. Certainty is of course not as strong as raw emotions like love, but it is dependable, and Shizuka strives for efficiency and economy rather than raw output. If that's not enough, she can fall back on her almost shounen manga-levels of sheer hot-blooded yandere-esque determination because she is unable to accept failure. Like her intelligence, she is far from being the best, but she finds ways to compensate for what she lacks. She will probably end up in a tactician/area control/support mage/healer sort of role.

@ El_Tigre - I'm glad you noticed the name. "Otonashi" means "soundless" while "Shizuka" means "quiet". Obviously it's a name-pun on her sound-related abilities. If someone asked for her name, her response might be interpreted as her telling them to shut up. I couldn't decide between "Shizuka" or "Sadame", which means "decision", "fate" or "judgment". If I had went with "Sadame", the name "Otonashi Sadame" would mean "silent judgment".

Anyways, I have completed my CS here is the link back to it if you don't want to scroll back up to look for it.

The main edits were that I filled out the "Hopes and Dreams", "Equipment", "History" and "Magic" sections with other minor edits here and there. Hope this is good.

Speaking on the subject of names, I got interested and looked up "Akane". Turns out it means "deep red". Wow. Lucky guess XD

El_Tigre said
Currently started Madoka Magica series <3

Oh... oh dear.

El_Tigre said
Currently started Madoka Magica series <3

Did I accidentally lead one of our players into despair?

Oops.

It shouldn't be that bad, so long as El Tigre keeps a calm head

LaXnyd said
It shouldn't be that bad, so long as El Tigre keeps a calm head

I just feel bad if he went into it without knowing what was ahead of him...

R.I.P in peace, El Tigre.

Now I am terrified D:

Nooooo~ Ya'll are doing this all wrong! You don't hint that anything is at all different or morbid about the series, you let them be suckered in cute opening and art style like the rest of us who were watching it as it came out!