I like the sound of it and I'd like to see it put down on the thread. I would also like to see some ranged abilities. But take all the time you need, I'm not trying to rush anyone. Quality takes time after all. 

I do have to point out that we're getting a lot of magic-types here, so I'm going to ask people who haven't already discussed it with me to come up with other ideas. We have a dearth of Metahumans right now, who are supposed to be far more common than every other type of hero.