Heres my character I hope he gets accepted.
(Work in Progress Will be finished as soon as possible.)


Name: Ryu Uchiha
Nickname/Alias: Ryu the Light Dragon
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 20
Age Appearance: 20
Sexuality: Straight

Parents:
Length and build 6'0" Muscled yet fairly lean.
Weight 200 lbs
Favorite weather and season Sunny and 75 in summer XD



Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Koonohagakure
Organization: n/a

Clan/Bloodline: Uchiha

Rank:Genin

Chakra Nature: Fire, Lightning



Appearance:



Personality: Sarcastic and witty, until it comes to training or battle then its all business.



History: Ryu was raised in the Uchiha clan as the son of one of the more known members. His father may not have been a leader among their clan but he was fairly well known for his abilities in combat. While in school he was ranked in the top 5 of his class and wsa shown to have inherited his fathers ability in combat. Having learned the Fire Ball Jutsu fairly quickly he was able to refine it and almost master it by the time he was a Chunin and the First Shinobi War started. During the war he fought with a team of 8 fellow class mates and was one of only 2 to survive. His best friend was on that team and was killed in battle. Ryu still feels guilty about that to this day seeing it as his fault for not being able to reach him in time to save him. After becoming a Jonin he requested and was denied entry into the ANBU Black Ops unit so he decided to continue going on missions and has recently requested to train a team of Genin.

Theme Song: (unknown at the moment


Weapons/Items[u][/u]: Sword, Kunai, Shuriken, Basic First Aid Kit, and Scrolls



Skills/Abilities
Chackra Control, Strategist, Combat Specialist



Special Traits
High Chackra Level

Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan (Clan)

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
Clan: Uchiha
Description: Optical Jutsu, Ryu's eyes contain three coma's



Jutsu:Fire Ball Jutsu
Jutsu: Phoenix Flower Jutsu



Custom Jutsu



Summons


Read more: http://narutorotg.proboards.com/thread/46/cs-form-rpg#ixzz33geUn3R2

-Keyblade87

I would advise to read the rule first. You seem to overlooked one. :)

DeathstrokeSW said
I can. Is there anything else wrong with my character in the meanwhile?

You can like get access to a laptop or such? Or?
So far I see, I would have like the link to the jutsu fixed and then it should be fine with me.

For clarification I have a laptop. Linking the Jutsu?

Yes, like that the name links to the Jutsu. I am running a bit out of time, but I would advise to look at other CS's for example.

explained and edited

Nathan I honestly see no changes what so ever.

You didn't answer Lesli questions/demands:
- Which war?
- You didn't remove the "probably the fastest of Amegakure"
- You hardly gave ANY extra detail on your jutsu

Also pet peeve of mine. Fuuton: Oxindo Oxooku (wind style: Windwalk) This name canNOT work. The Japanese don't have the letter x in their alphabet so using it in a Japanese name is rubbish.

Made some edits and ill vCard omelette the post either tonight or tomorrow morning since I work till 11:00 pm my time.

Keyblade87 said
Made some edits and ill vCard omelette the post either tonight or tomorrow morning since I work till 11:00 pm my time.

I recommend to look at some other Genin Cs's as example mate. :)
Though I can't accept those custom techniques.
Genins aren't allowed to start with a 3 tomo'd sharingan or two chakra natures in that case. That and not only for you but people.

Linking Jutsu properly, as in the other CS's would be great. Really really great. Thanks

If any help, here is a CS of a normal starting Genin :

Example 1
Example 2

I am sooooo down for that tourney, Alice.

Fieryfly said
1.Nathan I honestly see no changes what so ever.You didn't answer Lesli questions/demands:- Which war?-

2. You didn't remove the "probably the fastest of Amegakure"- You hardly gave ANY extra detail on your jutsu

3. Also pet peeve of mine. Fuuton: Oxindo Oxooku (wind style: Windwalk) This name canNOT work. The Japanese don't have the letter x in their alphabet so using it in a Japanese name is rubbish.

1. I'm sorry, I explained her on Skype. It was the great shinobi war, before the Amekage

2. It was not to be removed, I just has to keep in mind it would affect my relaxes and hand seals, just my movement
I'm having a hard time giving extra details, I don't know what to add, I'll ask for help.

3. Romaji.me gave it to me, else way it would be: Kaze Aruku? Or Kaze Sanpo? What do you suggest I call it? I'd like to hear your opinion.

Kazen will be entering the tournament once she is accepted

--Alternathan

I don't want to sound rude, but I think you need to read over what Fiery had said. The second and third are a bit... unneeded? Like, try to talk to people on the group chat if you need help? Many do that and that works out fine. That and the sign up is on the alternative forum... For accepted CS's. So best work on your CS first before you sign yourself up.

- I re-did the description and weaknesses of my Jutsu's (with a little hall from LillyDove (thanks))
I hope it;s okay now.

- I await a reply from fiery before editing the name of Wind Walk

- Anything else?

Looks much better now ^^

Hmm for the name. I think Kaze Sanpo would work the best seeing as aruku is a verb. Kaze Sanpo would indeed translate literally to wind walk. You could also go for Kaze no Sanpo meaning Walk of wind. Up to you ^^

alice! can I post our mini collab now?

You are aware that Katsuko can't join right j8? He is an ANBU.

Shadowcatcher said
alice! can I post our mini collab now?

Yes, sorry Shadowy. :C
Post that sad work.

okay. ^^

Can i get another approval please?