Well, things are going decently so far. Couple things:

I hope your overuse of ellipses is because of Wolfbane's current state, I wouldn't mind it being toned down.

Also, could you describe her appearanc when she's freed? She is a wounded woman with purple eyes, that's all I know.

I got a quick idea for the next arc on the same island: after our characters escape, they go to where your ship might be (not sure if the Marines acquisitioned it or what) and discover it stolen, leading to the next arc where they try to find it after learning it might not have gone far somehow. What do you think?

Lastly, are there any crew roles you'd like to reserve? I have a ton in mind for all positions, though we will need a navigator at some point.