*stares at Roro a moment*

uh...well, since i would rather not be 'poked' aka stabbed with a sword over a cheese touch, i'll just make it easy and uh... *creeps over and pokes him* ...take it back.

^^; no hard feelings! *runs*

I want to point out that Ryo Katsu totally said he was a kunoichi. This either means he is pulling a Tsubasa or Gero is so lazy he copied and pasted that from Yumi's post. XD

Solokolos, for future notes, my char's surname is Hatake, not Hataka. Its just a tiny mistake, but it changes the whole meaning, so its a bit annoying, seeing I know you don't do it on purpose. You've done it more than once, thats why I'm pointing it out

Okay Nim-Senpai, I'll make sure to fix every instance I've made that mistake. I'll try to make sure it won't happen again.

j8cob said
I want to point out that Ryo Katsu totally said he was a kunoichi. This either means he is pulling a Tsubasa or Gero is so lazy he copied and pasted that from Yumi's post. XD

Allow me to laugh really hard at this. Always knew Ryo and Kensuke were meant for each other.

Also Ryo never even once thought of the fact that he was leaving Midori behind too. He is a baaaaaaaaaaad boyfriend.

.... I was high at the time. D:

nim and solo, please look at the group pm

I would like to remind Zakito of the fact that he is NOT Hokage.

Thank you.

Kazen Reworked and edited to fit given feedback

Fieryfly said
I would like to remind Zakito of the fact that he is NOT Hokage. Thank you.

Thanks for keeping me up to date with stuff.

Marrow:

Accepted.

[center]Nami Tachibana



Name:
Izanami (female who invites) Tachibana (wild orange)
Nickname/Alias:
Nami
Gender:
Female
Age and date of birth:
14 - 8 February 462
Age Appearance:
15
Sexuality:
Open minded

Parents:
Yoshi Tachibana - Umeko Yoshida
Length and build:
1,58m - Scrawny
Weight
48 kg
Favorite weather and season
Clear - Spring

Village:
Kirigakure
Birthplace:
Kikgakure
Organization:
Kirigakure Genin

Clan/Bloodline:
Tachibana

Rank:
Genin

Chakra Nature:
Wind

Appearance:
http://i.imgur.com/B62Ga.jpg

Personality:

Nami is focussed with everything she does. She has to work hard and she knows it or else she will fail the expectations of the man she respects most. And Nami doesn't enjoy failing him. Nami doesn't like to talk about herself and her past. Her memories are hers and no one has to know anything about it. That doesn't mean she is extremely anti-social or a closed person. It just means that whatever she says is often not what she means and what she means is not what she says.

Because of her past Nami always had to look out for herself, all the troubles had to be shouldered by her since her brother was not ready for that, so she did and she grew from it. Functioning on her own is no problem for Nami because in the end you can always only fall back on yourself.

Nami has a strong set of beliefs of how the world has to be because of the man that brought her up. Yet she does not talk about them. As with everything her thoughts mostly remain a secret to everyone. Those that get too close are to be ignored, persuaded to look the other way or beaten down.

Keeping secrets is second nature for her. Giving someone information about herself or what she is doing could stab you in the back and Nami knows this from experience. This is why Nami has two sets of fighting capabilites. One to show off with and to openly train and one to use unnoticed. Nami is a sensor by default, always having had the capabilities to sense her surroundings to a certain degree, but she never told anyone this besides the man that adopted her. She uses Wind Release most of the time to defeat her enemies.

History:

Nami and her twinbrother Nagi were born in the beginning of the last year of the First Shinobi World War. It was a hard time, a time in which a lot of people died. Among those people were Nami and Nagi's parents and so the twins were among the many that went to Kirigakure's orphanhouses. They had no relatives that could take care of them, no friends of the family that could handle the burden of two more kids. Times were hard and people couldn't spare that much.

The orphanage was what you would expect from an orphanage after war. Full. Kids young and old tried to grow up there and in the middle were the little twins. But they made it through one better then the other. Even though Nagi was the boy and he had been born first he was the weaker one and Nami was always looking out for him. The orphanage wasn't the richest in town so they had to live with what they got and it wasn't uncommon that they got nothing because others took it. Somehow Nami had a knack for it though. She just seemed to know when to hide and where, as if she knew where people were. This ability actually, unbeknown to Nami, came from the fact that she had an affinity for sensing.

But how much Nami tried to help her brother he just was not very strong and when they were eleven he fell ill. Soon he was not able to leave his bed anymore and after a couple of weeks he seemed to just give up and die. Nami was lonely then. They had lived with each other, they had lived off each other's energy. Now that he was gone there was just nothing left. But she couldn't give up her life. She had tried giving her life to her brother already by giving him all she had, her food, her blankets, but it hadn't worked so clearly she was meant to live and he wasn't.

For a year Nami hang about, hiding, unknowingly improving her own skills. When she was twelve, however, this changed. She was adopted together with a few others. The person who adopted them gave them a roof above their head, gave them food and most of all sent them to the Academy. Apparantly he saw potential in the kids he had found. The rules in the house were strict and were meant to be followed, but Nami lived. She lived and it was thanks to that man. Without him she would never have been able to afford school, she would never have been able to learn anything at all and she would have ended on the street. And while he might not be awfully nice, he was her savior and in some way she worshipped him for that. He taught her about the world and about what she needed to believe in, what she had to fight for.

With those things in mind she graduated and aims to reach further and show that man that she can do what he wants her to do. Help the world.

Theme Song:


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:

Skills/Abilities
Good chakra control
Good with throwing weapons
Trained in sensor techniques

Special Traits
Sensor affinity

Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: None
Clan:
Description:

Jutsu:


Custom Jutsu
[/center]

Name:Michio(Man on the right path) Yuki
Nickname/Alias:Michi
Gender:Male
Age and date of birth: 12
Age Appearance: 10
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Father- Kobo Yuki, Mother- Kuniko Yuki
Length and build 5" Lean kind of muscle
Weight100
Favorite weather and season Windy/Autumn

Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: None
Clan/Bloodline:Yuki
Rank:Genin
Chakra Nature:Suiton/Fūton

Appearance:

Personality:Michio is naturally curious but holds it back because of his poor childhood experiences. His early childhood also caused him to have initial trust-issues with adults until they prove themselves, so he normally acts rather reclusive towards them. He is very determined to reach his goals but won't bullheadedly pursue them.

History:Michio's mother is a courier ninja who gets the money for the family. His father stays at home and takes care of Michio and the house work. His father isn't much of a ninja and isn't ashamed to admit that his wife is much stronger than him. They have a nice house and they make enough money to go out for nice things every once in a while. Michio always admired how strong his mother was and wanted to become strong like her and help earn money for his family. Both his mother and his father encourage him to become a strong ninja and his father helps Michio work on his technique at home.

They got Michio after being married for about a year, and were very happy to get a child. Michio was always loved as a child but when he was very young he was playing in the street and one of the Mizukage's patrols came by. Michio didn't move out of the way quickly enough and one of shinobi kicked Michio into a wall. His father came rushing out of the house when he heard the bang and rushed outside. Kobo saw the shinobi moving towards his son and moved into the way, he begged the gaurd to leave Michio alone and the guard cut of his arm for sticking it where it didn't belong. Kuniko arrived back from a deliver soon after and used her healing jutsu to stop Kobo from bleeding out but his arm couldn't be saved. Michio was always more reclusive and watchful from then on and began to pay attention to the mistreatment of everyone by the Mizukage's shinobi. Michio never forgave those Shinobi and wanted to became the Mizukage to stop such bad things from happening. A childish dream perhaps in such a brutal place, but one that Michio has held on to.

Theme Song:Unbreakable

Weapons/Items[u][/u]


Skills/Abilities
-High stamina
-Good chakra control
-Does well with higher level techniques
-Excellent combat mind
-Ice swords
-Water prison
-Sub-par speed

*Cannot use currently*
Name of Kekkei Genkai:Hyōton
Clan: Yuki
Description: Hyōton is the advanced nature kekkei genkai of the Yuki clan, and allows the users to combine wind and water-based chakra to create and manipulate ice, forming it into various structures.

Jutsu:

Custom Jutsu

Name:Michio(Man on the right path) Yuki
Nickname/Alias:Michi
Gender:Male
Age and date of birth: 12
Age Appearance: 10
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Father- Kobo Yuki, Mother- Kuniko Yuki
Length and build 5" Lean kind of muscle
Weight100
Favorite weather and season Windy/Autumn

Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: None
Clan/Bloodline:Yuki
Rank:Genin
Chakra Nature:Suiton/Fūton

Appearance:

Personality:Michio is naturally curious but holds it back because of his poor childhood experiences. His early childhood also caused him to have initial trust-issues with adults until they prove themselves, so he normally acts rather reclusive towards them. He is very determined to reach his goals but won't bullheadedly pursue them.

History:Michio's mother is a courier ninja who gets the money for the family. His father stays at home and takes care of Michio and the house work. His father isn't much of a ninja and isn't ashamed to admit that his wife is much stronger than him. They have a nice house and they make enough money to go out for nice things every once in a while. Michio always admired how strong his mother was and wanted to become strong like her and help earn money for his family. Both his mother and his father encourage him to become a strong ninja and his father helps Michio work on his technique at home.

They got Michio after being married for about a year, and were very happy to get a child. Michio was always loved as a child but when he was very young he was playing in the street and one of the Mizukage's patrols came by. Michio didn't move out of the way quickly enough and one of shinobi kicked Michio into a wall. His father came rushing out of the house when he heard the bang and rushed outside. Kobo saw the shinobi moving towards his son and moved into the way, he begged the gaurd to leave Michio alone and the guard cut of his arm for sticking it where it didn't belong. Kuniko arrived back from a deliver soon after and used her healing jutsu to stop Kobo from bleeding out but his arm couldn't be saved. Michio was always more reclusive and watchful from then on and began to pay attention to the mistreatment of everyone by the Mizukage's shinobi. Michio never forgave those Shinobi and wanted to became the Mizukage to stop such bad things from happening. A childish dream perhaps in such a brutal place, but one that Michio has held on to.

Theme Song:Unbreakable

Weapons/Items[u][/u]


Skills/Abilities
-High stamina
-Good chakra control
-Does well with higher level techniques
-Excellent combat mind
-Ice swords
-Water prison
-Sub-par speed

Name of Kekkei Genkai:Hyōton
Clan: Yuki
Description: Hyōton is the advanced nature kekkei genkai of the Yuki clan, and allows the users to combine wind and water-based chakra to create and manipulate ice, forming it into various structures.

Jutsu:

Custom Jutsu


I haven't RP'ed much and probably will need a bit of help but this looks fun and i would like to join :).
(Sorry if this goes through twice my computer being wacky)

It seems I did manage to ost my cs here too last night. It can be ignored because the better coded version is already up on the back up forum. I thought the site had crashed.

@eklipse: Welcome I will grade your cs as soon as I get backfrom university.

@Gero: I will be glad to help then.

@Eklispe

Okay, my review :

1. Please add Ice at the nature releases. I was almost going to say an instant no, until I read he has the Ice release. You need to put that he has it, cause a genin without a KG and two natures at the start? Not going to be accepted.

2.The skills/abilities are too high for a starting genin. I am really going to think about writing something guide people on that.

-High stamina
High skills aren't allowed for a starting genin.

-Good chakra control
Accepted, but keep in mind that his reserves are average then.

-Does well with higher level techniques
No. How is this explained or possible? It has to have a logical reason. Some clans allow characters to learn things at a rapid speed, but it isn't making it easier for them to learn higher level techniques.

-Excellent combat mind
How? Tactics? Elaborate please?

-Ice swords
Not needed here.

-Water prison
Not needed here.

-Sub-par speed
I am wavering about this. You mean high speed? Not going to work for a starting genin.

3. The Ice sword technique is odd. If its deprived from Water Cutting Sword, its not a D ranked technique at all. It is also a bit weird when I noticed this :

Fire(although it is resilient to fire)

So fire can destroy it, but yet it is resilient against fire?

Please not that I ask the question in a manner that may seem blunt, but I am not trying to put you down or such in any kind of manner. My motive with being so blunt is simply to make you think about the points and try to edit them. I do like the history as Kirigakure is kind of the grim place. At least in public. xD

Thanks i don't mind the bluntness i will go fix, also what rank would you assign ice sword, and what else would you like me to remove to make him less OP?(And by sub-par i meant low speed sorry about that)

Gero: sub-par means below average. :p

Eklispe said
Thanks i don't mind the bluntness i will go fix, also what rank would you assign ice sword, and what else would you like me to remove to make him less OP?(And by sub-par i meant low speed sorry about that)

If its on par with Water Sword, most likely high C or B ranked. If its weaker, you need to edit it and make it weaker.
And no sorry for the low speed. My brain isn't great at multitasking... Now I need to repair something. *grumbles*