Ah, Prisk, I feel the necessity to apologize for taking my time in completing my character. I think I managed to get myself caught up in researching on what I wanted her to be exactly and how she'll pan out over the story! I jot down my own notes in regards to character and plot points as well. But I've finished her Limit Break at least, but if I feel that it may be a bit much in conduits of power, then it probably is. I haven't asked for your criticism, yet, but if time provides it I'd appreciate it if you to take a look over what I've conducted thus far.

I won't be able to change and finish her until I get off work tonight however, so I require just a little more patience until I finally get done!
c:

Sixsmith said
There should totally be an equivalent."Galaxy Chasers, Episode IV: A Renewed Conviction"Boom. This world's pop-culture has been established! Kind of.

Hah, 'Galaxy Chasers.'

Rockette said
Ah, Prisk, I feel the necessity to apologize for taking my time in completing my character. I think I managed to get myself caught up in researching on what I wanted her to be exactly and how she'll pan out over the story! I jot down my own notes in regards to character and plot points as well. But I've finished her Limit Break at least, but if I feel that it may be a bit much in conduits of power, then it probably is. I haven't asked for your criticism, yet, but if time provides it I'd appreciate it if you to take a look over what I've conducted thus far.I won't be able to change and finish her until I get off work tonight however, so I require just a little more patience until I finally get done! c:

No need to apologize. There is plenty of time.

I’m sure that you get compliments regarding your prose on a regular basis. It is a bit too purple for my taste, but I’m not going to prevent you from writing the way you do. However, keep in mind that this kind of English may not be within everyone’s comprehension—I just need to say it for the record. But, then again, this is the ‘advanced’ section.

You are good on personality and biography.

Your limit break somewhat reminded me of Vincent’s limit break in FFVII. It felt as if it was obscure due to the prose, but when I picked out the parts that actually describe what it does, it was quite clear anyway and anchored in two elements: fire and dark. As it stands now, limit breaks cannot really be ‘overpowered,’ as all of them instantly kill all enemies anyway. It’s just an aesthetic choice. So do not worry about that.

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@Blackwell, Tenish, Ozerath: I've completed my notes for your characters. Please post them in the Character Depository.

Ozerath said
Didn't realize I got 100th post, YUS, I R MOST BEST, SUCK IT SLOOTS!Took a look at Olivia's updated CS, and I'm kindof relieved to see that picture of her gunblade. I was actually worrying I'd made Thael's weapons too fancy, especially compared to the very utilitarian weapons other people have been posting. I wanted them to be golden and scream "jUUUSTTIIICCEEE", but I also wanted them to fit IC.Also, dammit people, your characters are too charming, I'm gonna start twidling with relationships anyways XD. I too imagine Freddy and Thael would make a great duo. If Freddy's the shouty team mom, Thael's the gentle giant team dad. They'd probably argue fairly often, as married couples do, out of sight of the rest of the team. Wouldn't want to upset the kids XD"Freddy, don't be so hard on Puck, he just needs a little space to find himself right now.""GAWD DAMMIT WOMAN HE DOESN'T NEED SPACE HE NEEDS HELP!""Maybe you're right, I just don't want to put him on the spot""I'm sorry I yelled, let's talk to that little SHITHEAD tomorrow."But they'd also team up for maximum effect."Alright guys, did everyone read the ops plan? It's pretty straightforward, but I want everyone to stay safe okay?"*snickering in the background*"WHO THE FUCK WAS THAT? If I find out who that was I will personally insert a cactus DEEP INTO YOUR BUTTHOLE! Pay attention you jizznuggets, this shit's important."Edit: Aaannndd now I'm imagining Freddy and Thael quietly sitting in a queen sized bed together in nightgowns, Freddy reading a book and smoking a pipe while Thael works on his knitting XD

Aaaand now I kinda wanna ship tease Freddy and Thael. XD Or at least make them heterosexual life partners.

Actually, from an RPG perspective, in combat I imagine Freddy and Thael would make a perfect tank duo. Thael's more durable, but Freddy can certainly take a hit too, and Freddy's shouts are able to disable foes repeatedly and keep them from harming Thael too much while also drawing attention away from Thael. So, a tank plus a disabler/off tank.

Edit: Oh fuck yes Galaxy Chasers. I am going to have Freddy reference so many fandoms.

Also, it would appear you all think Freddy is obsessed with butt shoving. HE HAS OTHER THREATS, PEOPLE! >:U lol

Finally! Page has loaded! Is it me or is there are a lot of down time?

Noice. I will toast in the bread. JUSTIIIIICCCCEEE!

Any word on my character

The only thing Fred and Roy will have in common is their utter hatred of Galaxy Chasers, Episode I: The Spectral Nuisance and what a disgrace it was to the Galaxy Chasers name. ;(

"HIDOCHLORINS WHAT THE FUCK!? THE VOICE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE THIS VAGUE FREAKING SPACE MAGIC WHAT THE CUNTBLEACHING HOLLYWOOD FUCK ARE YOU DOING LUCAS GEORGE!?"

Edit: Well, once again, Freddy is gonna rage about Aaron's rage without acknowledging that raging about raging is totally hypocritical. If someone brings his hypocrisy up, then he'll respond with, "Then get this flaming dickwaffle to calm his major rager so we can stop freaking ARGUING ABOUT THIS!"

Freddy will also be pretty concerned about Aaron's mental state, and will urge him to get therapy.

Eh, Galaxy Chasers was never really my bag. The whole thing always seemed a bit contrived to me, with its slavish devotion to Joseph Progresso's Unimyth and old foreign films.

Galaxy Wander, now there's a franchise, especially the second series, The Subsequent Era, with Captain John-Luke Pickart, played by the indomitable Stewart Patrick. Now there was a show with depth and breadth. Delving into the nature of life, love, sentience. The whole spectrum of human art and culture, really. I especially love the episodes with G in them.

On a related note, the actor who played G was brought on to voice a character based on G in that recent, popular cartoon, My Tiny Equine: Camaraderie is Sorcery...not, of course, that Remi watches that program or anything...or has written a 700,000 word, POV fanfic crossing over CiS with the popular, post-apocalyptic, video game series Black Rain...because...you know...he doesn't...and he hasn't...

Anyway, someone said they needed a place to stay after their parents moved or bought it or something? The Morgensterns would have been happy to take someone in, especially since their only child turned into such a lovable ball of joy. I can't find the post so I don't remember who said it, one of the ladyfolk if I remember, but I think it would be neat to throw in something like a brother-sister dynamic between Remi and one of the others. I need to edit my bio a bit anyway to better fit the timeline.

I believe it was Katherine, but Blackwell decided that she would stay at the dorms of the academy.

Edit: Which reminds me, the Appleberry's would also love to have more "grandchildren" around them :D

Freddy finds Galaxy Wander to be beautiful, just with how humanity has evolved and how optimistic it is. If he's caught watching it, he claims it's for the drama, but secretly he just finds such an idealic future to be utterly beautiful.

He thinks My Tiny Equine is for faggots. Not gay people. Faggots. Not homosexuals. Faggots. Not bundles of sticks. Faggots. Not cigarrettes. Faggots. Not old people. Faggots. Not married women. Faggots.

JJ Doe said
I believe it was Katherine, but Blackwell decided that she would stay at the dorms of the academy.

This is true.

Adorabadass said
Aaaand now I kinda wanna ship tease Freddy and Thael. XD Or at least make them heterosexual life partners.

Kat will fight you. XD

Oh my god, Black, we have to have both Freddy and Kat crush on Thael, and have one of them go to the other for advice on whether they should go through with it. :'D

Adorabadass said
Freddy finds Galaxy Wander to be beautiful, just with how humanity has evolved and how optimistic it is. If he's caught watching it, he claims it's for the drama, but secretly he just finds such an idealic future to be utterly beautiful.He thinks My Tiny Equine is for faggots. Not gay people. Faggots. Not homosexuals. Faggots. Not bundles of sticks. Faggots. Not cigarrettes. Faggots. Not old people. Faggots. Not married women. Faggots.

So...

Annoying Biker Guys?

Blackwell said
This is true. Kat will fight you. XD

Adorabadass said
Oh my god, Black, we have to have both Freddy and Kat crush on Thael, and have one of them go to the other for advice on whether they should go through with it. :'D

Lol.

*Schemes*

Exactly.

Freddy fucking hates faggots on harleys.

Now now guys, there's plenty of Thael love to go around.

Or is there... #ominous

Adorabadass said
Oh my god, Black, we have to have both Freddy and Kat crush on Thael, and have one of them go to the other for advice on whether they should go through with it. :'D

And then Kat can lie to keep him all to herself. No one would expect that.

Sixsmith said
Lol.*Schemes*

Got my eyes on you. *squints*

Ozerath said
Now now guys, there's plenty of Thael love to go around.Or is there... #ominous

Dun dun dun!

Ozerath said
Now now guys, there's plenty of Thael love to go around.Or is there... #ominous

Blackwell said
And then Kat can lie to keep him all to herself. No one would expect that.Got my eyes on you. *squints*Dun dun dun!

I just feel like you all are going to be very disappoint.

There's enough of Thael to fill a room.

Or, at the very least, enough to fill Freddy and Kat. *badum tshhhh*

And lmao what would Kat even lie about? XD

Ozerath, how did your character become da PimpDaddy Fo' Justice?

Because everyone wants some of Captain Hero McRugged!