I'm going to humor you Mr. 420blazeit, I'm going to help you correct your CS if you truly want to join
Name:The Great Shlongdom = (Sorry but that is a title, not a name, put an actual name here like eg: John Doe, then create a different one for a title)
Race:Brenton = (this is fine, good job)
Age:20 = (so is this0
Appearance: Really pretty, a bit like Channing Tatum = (Ok, generally you want to use pictures, if that is to hard for your little brain to handle, I suggest description, not just "looks a bit like Channing Tatum" Describe his hair, eyes body shape, height, weight, need to go into detail if you can't use a pic)
Five major skills: Killing Elves, Ruling people, Winning battles, Using lots of magic, Having a huge magical sword = (Ok please read the first post, you are just being stupid)
Five minor skills: Signing, Dancing, Playing the violin, Running fast, Making lots of awesome weapons = (Same with this, please read the first post, and don't just make sh*t up)
Class name: Warrior = (this is fine, good job again)
Brief history: I murdered loads of elves and became king of a huge Clan = (First, never use "I", this is a character you created, not You, so no "Is Mes or Mys" secondly, try to have a little more detail, what was he doing before killing elves, why did he kill the elves, why was he made a king of a clan for killing the elves and why was he captured)
Right follow those tips and you will be as good as any normal newbie, also bare in mind, different rules apply to different RP's so please read the first post carefully, and follow rules.