[quote=SpartanDoesAcid]
Alright, I think I fixed all of the military errors (I don't know how I figured that 1 regiment=1,000 troops, too much Europa Universalis) and modified the territories a bit. I think all the huge mistakes are fixed. Inform me if you see any other inaccuracies, given how bad I did it the first time there probably is one.
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Your territory points now total 99, totally fine there. You've correctly calculated your Regiment Points at 182. By my count, you've currently got 179 RP worth of army, so you could grab another Experienced Aviani or Raptorian unit if you want it. You have 45 (or 46 if Kadaeux lets us round up) points to spend on command units, and by my count you've only used 39, so you could get a Hero of the Realm or a couple more Commanders if you feel like it. Air force is an even 45 points used, no issues there. No monsters or navy, but that's not a mistake judging by your zero monster traits and lack of coastal provinces. 

The only true mistake I saw was equivalent to a minor typo: you listed your 30 Regiments of Raptorian Infantry as being 3,600 men at full strength, but your total count at the bottom isn't miscalculated. I figure you just missed changing that number when you went and fixed stuff, no big deal.