[quote=Harlequin Girl]
First and foremost, hey Cap'n! Sorry I kind of, erm, piggybacked off of your idea but I couldn't help but wonder why the daughter got hit in the first place. So, yeah, if you want me to change it, let me know, I totally don't mind! GM, I hope this CS is suitable enough. I'm quite pooped and working on my phone this evening. Let me know if I need to tinker anything.
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Noooo I love it! Seriously, it's great! This means there's an even deeper connection between our characters in the cabin, not just Mr. X. And that story! Daaaamn! In my head I imagined the car just kinda driving on the sidewalk as it turned, but you made it better. GJ, don't change it, Charliequin.