Finally got the post up - it's a bit overly-long, I know, but because I messed up my first attempt at posting I ended up just "adding on" to the original post when I edited. 

Siphran - Artesa's CS mentions that the colour scheme for the combat armour isn't white, like in the picture, but I wasn't sure what colour you intended it to be, so I assumed white and am happy to change it if you want. Also, I made the assumption that the communication abilities of her augment worked on a similar basis to communicating with a phone or a computer nowadays, in that you need to know the specific address/identity of that device (IP address, or phone number, or email address, something like that) in order to communicate directly. If this is different to what you had in mind, again, I'll go and edit.