GYWYDK, I cannot accept that character as it is. She looks like she could be five but is somehow 20, and she has blue hair. And the personalty, besides giving me a headache just reading it, is a no go. I suggest try writing a lot less for personality, as much of it will be determined IC. I just want a basic idea for now, one that will likely change dramatically as the story unfolds. I did enjoy the writing style though, but it's out of place in a CS, which unlike an IC post is meant to be more concise. Those who've posted a character here, if I don't say anything about them that just means that there's nothing wrong or out of place with them. I'll be accepting characters after the OOC is up and when I close the RP to new players. No comment doesn't mean I'm ignoring the character or anything. A note for everybody: I'm also looking for characters outside of the RPer norm of 16-21. The youngest and oldest characters in the original story ended up being just as powerful as any of the other gods.