[quote=Makatsume Haru]
@Bomberman: All right, I kind of get the picture you want for Yikito, though I think you should go a little more in dept with what his family does, how he met his childhood friend, how come a kid could just grab a grenade and pull off the safe lock, things like that. To be honest, I find it somewhat vague, as well as his personality. What are we defining here as 'good' things? What a good thing for Yikito may be, might be somethign totally different from someone else, maybe you should say something like 'he tries to do things he finds ethically correct, such as helping grannies with their bags, etc...' Of course, I don't wanna interfere with your writing style, but I do find it somewhat redundant. I think you have way, WAY more things to fill on about him due to a traumatic event such as seeing someone die in front of you gives you much ground to work with. Though, this are just my suggestions, you are free not to follow them and go with whatever you think will look better than your current CS. Also, OTP=One true pairing, meaning, which Persona characters would you like to see together as a couple.@Jelly: Never knew you were a Persona fan, Jelly. In case you are here to join, xD. Mmmm...... Considering you, I think you'd be good with an Arcana like the Empress or the Moon would be good for you, if you wanna know more about them, check the link in the OP.
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Ah I see okay then i'll work on it some more. Now that I think about it it's pretty silly how Yikito is not affected at all by his best friend blowing up in front of him...

 Thank you for pointing that out. :)