paige, go ahead. Guys, your CSes will be checked by Faith later. My opinion on your cses so far: John, I think mind control and memory alteration aren't in the same vein. We'll see what Faith says about it later, though. Hiro, I assumed you'll have time control haha. I think your character is okay, just the phrasing of it. If he alters temperature, he might as well freeze things too, so my advise would be to 'raise temperatures'. Twins, I think they're good. Same with the other Captain, it's pretty unique. Don't change your CSes yet, this is just my assessment and Faith will be the one to decide things. Kidd and drummer (and others wanting to join in) feel free to post your CSes.