[quote=Sini]
I think it's looking well, but let's wait for Vanqsie to cast her lovely eye at it :).I like the old lord thing, people waiting for him to just . An Essosi flavoured Ironborn is interesting, and he will have trouble commanding the respect of his kinsmen.The Greystark though? That clashes with canon. We know the Greystarks were the last to command the Wolf's Den and White Harbor, but that was a 1,000 years ago before the Manderlys (ousted from the Reach around that time) took up residence in the North with sanction of Lord Stark. The Greystarks are extinct.However, it does not clash with canon hard, I find, to diregard the character. A forgotten son, last of his damned line? I think it's juicy. Have you checked with the Stark player?
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I'm glad you like it! 

The primary thrust of Brandon Greystark is that it's much more likely that he's just a descendant of some northern bastard son who wanted a name for himself. After all, sellswords in Essos can take just about any name they like. The question his potential story asks is how much that actually matters when the chips are down and swords are drawn. He's betting on "not much," but we'll see.

I'll drop the Stark player a line. I can pretty easily make him a Mudd, Teague, or Gardener, depending on who's okay with this guy's existence.