[B]Nytem4re[/b], thanks for the submission! Dlayeth told us you were coming. Lovely character and an amazing sample. The dark twist at the end was dynamite. I'm very excited to RP with you, welcome on board. :)

[B]Andre[/b], I appreciate the edit, thank you. ^3^

[B]Wrensthav[/b], excellent first post! :3 You don't need to edit it, but for future note, typically you refer to your charrie in third person. And to differentiate thoughts better, rule of thumb is to italicize them, and then you can refer in first person.