Anyway... she really hates to be so critical... but shes having trouble really finding it believable. Not sure why terrorists would be going after one random persons house for money. Thats like... more just common gang activity who would be more likely just to shoot someone than bomb the place. She hates to nitpick on grammar too, but some of it feels awkward after reading it over a few times, could use some proof reading.
hrnnng, she hates being the critical one. She always ends up sounding like a bitch.
Eh posted, will post again tonight if Haru gives the okay.
Note that Ken WILL find it suspicious that all of the persona users wind up in the same dorm, I know I know, narrative convenience, AND it was my suggestion. But I'm trying to keep him reasonably paranoid like a sociopath should be.
Draconilian said
Also, can we all just post individually picking up dorm assignments or do you want to moderate things along haru?
Oh, yeah, I don't see why not. I don't really have an objection to it, though I don't know what you'd like, single rooms like in P3 or 2 people per room? That also needs to be asked. What do you want, people?