[quote=Estylwen]
excellent first post! :3 You don't need to edit it, but for future note, typically you refer to your charrie in third person. And to differentiate thoughts better, rule of thumb is to italicize them, and then you can refer in first person.
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Ahh ok i should have asked what narrative point we were using with our characters. I assumed 1st since there are so many participating.