@Masaki Haruna: I'm sorry to say I can't accept this. My main problems are that Kyouka's personality seems to be all over the place and...frankly, the contract feels more like a kitsune than Inari. Also, the fused form being naked seems...kind of random and awkward, if I'm being honest.

@Taro: My only real objection here is that Raijin is a god. There's no real issue with making contracts with gods, just that, unless I've missed something in the things I've read, Raijin's not a species of beings. 

@Tatsua: To be honest, the only thing about that contract that's acceptable is the personality.

@Roxas & Spoo: Looking good so far.

@Kael: Both the teleportation and omniscience + amazing reflexes/speed seem to read like they could be used to no sell basically anything thrown at Xander. In addition, I'm not exactly sure what the normal/fused powers have to do with Nemesis.

As for Maya...I'm not sure about the blinding stuff, but I'd be willing to see how that plays out in the RP and ask for it to be nerfed if necessary. However, if I'm reading it correctly, that paralysing ability is basically an instant win, since...there's not really much the opponent can do to break eye contact if they're paralysed. And...well, the summon is...I get that it makes sense for Nyx, but again, "everyone else is now asleep" is basically an instant win and "one person is now asleep forever and can't be woken up by anything" is basically the same as an instant kill.