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As much as your character is interesting, I suggest that you have a bio that more strongly represents the fantasy character you described, I mean your character is awesome, and the fantasy bio is ok, because it is meant to be short, but the real life one is what is supposed to link up why your fantasy character is that way. It is how the protagonist saw you when she was alive, and also I don't understand the relation, Sister or neighbor? Maybe it is because I'm incompetent, but you didn't exactly describe it well if you did mention it. Other than that good luck with your character.