[quote=Toaw]
As much as your character is interesting, I suggest that you have a bio that more strongly represents the fantasy character you described, I mean your character is awesome, and the fantasy bio is ok, because it is meant to be short, but the real life one is what is supposed to link up why your fantasy character is that way. It is how the protagonist saw you when she was alive, and also I don't understand the relation, Sister or neighbor? Maybe it is because I'm incompetent, but you didn't exactly describe it well if you did mention it. Other than that good luck with your character.
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My character is intended to be the big sister of the protagonist. The fantasy side is how the little sister SEES her, not necessarily how she truly is. Being that the MC has not been fully developed, I tried to keep the Real Character Bio as vague as possible.

Also, I only used the term "girl next door" to describe the type of personality she has. (See [url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Girl_next_door]here[/url]) Sorry if that was confusing.