@Kiratherogue We're going to need a bit more information, develop your character a little more. Also in this modern age katanas won't help much unless it's enchanted or has some special ability. And if your character is going to be a fighter she might need some magical powers, or she'll be outclassed by everyone she encounters. Remember, in this universe you are born with magical abilities. The only thing you have to do is learn spells. @Nuttynad Your CS seems alright for the most part, but I would change how she got involved with Operation Freedom a little bit. They don't recruit out of the blue. It's a long process where they feel you out in order to see what your true intentions are. I have no problem with your character being in OF, just a small alteration of how she joined in.