So Mokeia, I actually found the character interesting with a personality that might actually be more interesting than you think in this RP. I don't mean to say its bad (I'm trying to be careful with language now) but there's no elves, just humans and Vygorns, which look Human. The "hating humanity" can stay however. I really like it. Just make him a human who kind of "lost faith in humanity" kind of thing maybe. And I also would like to point out that there's no countries anymore in this world since it's all controlled by one group, the Vygorns. People don't really know they're supernatural because they take human form and tell the rich and the politicians what to do. They are the unseen governing force. Otherwise its great! ProTip: remove the "*" from the image's QQCode ;)