[quote=Dervish]
Quick thing for Vivid in regards to equipment, the Evicerator shotgun hasn't actually been invented yet, according to the Wiki's full name for it. The Punisher is fine, although that's an uncommon piece given it's exclusively made and distributed to the Blood Pack. You may wish to say how Saseen came across it (probably dead Blood Pack merc or black market), but keep in mind it will draw suspicion if she ever runs into the Blood Pack. There's a couple really minor lore things I'll have to go over, but nothing serious. More to come!
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I went ahead and changed out both weapons! Sorry about the Evicerator thing, that was a silly mistake. I had all of the shotguns open in separate tags when I was trying to figure out which one I wanted her to use, so I guess I just got confused. I originally put down the Blood Pack pistol just because it's always my favorite for asari vanguards in game. But I thought about how much you've emphasized stats not being that important in the RP, anyways, and downgraded a bit!

I apologize in advance about lore mistakes! I used wiki to double check a lot of what I put down, but just went with my memory from the games for other aspects. That's probably where most errors in that regard came from, haha. I'll give it another read over myself. There are some bits left over from one of my first drafts that I think I still have to remove, anyways. Also, you should know that I'm heavily considering changing her to have been, primarily, a smuggler. I feel like it might fit with the character concept I was trying to go with -character who wants to be the exciting badass criminal but actually really dislikes killing, among other things- a bit better. So I guess it's still sort of a WIP. But I'd still very much welcome any critiquing on what I already have, so that I don't make any of the same mistakes again!