Well, for starters how about I point out that you're clearly trying to start off as powerful as you can get away with?

Nothing wrong with that, but I was under the impression that the Apprentices would pretty much begin on an [i]even playing field[/i], whereas both your characters are clearly OP comparatively speaking. *shrug*

Oh well, Kurai and Wayward will give their judgement on it so feel free to disregard what I say.