[quote=SoleAccord]
Fix some of the issues I've mentioned and try again. If my analysis is too harsh for you and you no longer wish to join the group, then you're free to do that too.
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Too harsh? Well now that's just insulting ^_^ Thanks for the criticism, if Seijuro is not liked here perhaps I will scrap the idea and offer another character.

Oh, but one thing. The massacre of 122 people kind of eliminates the threat of things like 'background checks' when you do it right. You know... cause no one knows you're a murderer? This was a shortened version of Seijuro's actual history where the dots are connected more fluidly. I admit I half-assed that one as I've had a lot on my plate, not like that matters to you though. ^.^

I revised his bio, changed his history, removed several techniques including his sensor ability and made his Shinsoku more damaging to himself. Gave his illusions a clear-cut weakness that any intelligent shinobi can pick up on. I just have to work on the endpoint of his history, but I'm not sure how you want to deal with his status as an ANBU member seeing as his status in the Bingo book isn't exactly set in stone.