[quote=vancexentan] Personality - Hapalo is a humble and kind individual whom doesn't like to brag about his accomplishments. However he does sometimes tend to slip into a sarcastic or slightly prideful demeanor under certain circumstances. He has an extremely intense will and refuses to let anything get to him proving to be an intense individual when the need arises while still able to be patient and respectful even to enemies. He hasn't yet faced the choice of killing people but he does maintain the thought that some individuals are not worth saving. However he does view the majority of people more often than not as worth saving despite the cost to him. He is selfless and is not afraid to share with others. He enjoys consuming things sometimes mindlessly doing so out of habit more than anything but he doesn't like to consume in mass unless he has to. He doesn't like rude individuals. He loves to grin but it is more out of being a generally pleasant person than genuine happiness. He likes cracking a joke every now and then but doesn't do it excessively in fact he is mostly a reserved individual. He believes strongly that everyone has the willpower to succeed and that they need only to strive for it to become stronger. He hates obsessive people and views them as people whom have lost control of themselves and thus lives a life of moderation himself. He is a shy individual around females he has not met before and tends to stutter nervously unless he has important business in which case he can control himself but has trouble making eye contact. Experience - 6 Months [/quote] After reading your latest IC post I question if you remembered your own character's personality. Speaking up and questioning superior officers when he's supposed to be shy and reserved on top of having strong will and determination has me thinking he'd have just accepted the challenge after being a Lantern for six months. Seemed like he was more whiny than sarcastic when questioning the reasoning behind the mission and the enemy. While technically we're all still rookies, other than Hal Jordan in the New52 the other Earth Lanterns only have 2-4 years experience tops and they've accomplished a lot. I started a new job back in February I had no experience in whatsoever, after only four months I'm fairly certain I can do the job better than most people in the place. A strong willed and determined Lantern wouldn't ask about if the senior GL's were going to use them as fodder, or question the stats of an enemy as powerful as Agent Orange [who's seen as a bigger threat than Parallax], ESPECIALLY if they're educated enough to know about the Red Lanterns. Those are questions for the actual rookies who've only got a day or two's experience. I think you write good but I'm positive you can do better. Try not to make it one large block of text. ~KL~