[quote=Enalais]
Name of Group: Merrick's RangersType:Private Military ContractorsAssets:Small Base in the Bahamas used for training,Recruitment, and motor poolPersonnel:1000 (400 Operators the other 600 are misc personnel cooks,mechanics,gunsmiths,ETC) History:Merrick's Rangers were a split off of a private military corporation after the war they were the deep reconnaissance and Intelligence gathering arm of the corporation that was led by Merrick's forebear they participated in the war and fought together marking targets for the countries who hired them they made it big and soon they became known as Paulson's Rangers but towards the end of the war Paulson died and left control of the group to him from that day forward they became known as Merrick's rangers.Merrick knew he was going to have to find someplace safe and sound after the war so leaving behind the now bankrupt company he bought out his former training base and now uses it to launch operations across the globe for the right price.
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We do not have insanely high standards here, but we like to keep it at or above what seems to be called "high casual" or "low advanced" here. There is no way such a tiny app is going to be accepted, it contains only the most basic hard facts. Tell us more, when did they split off? Who founded the original company? Why did they do it? What are Merrick's goals and ambitions? Who is he? What drives him? (unless that is planned for character development) What sort of weapons does the group use, is it old gear or some sort of experimental device? Do they have distinctive vehicles and weapons, or do they buy them off the market? Will the group kill anyone for a few bucks, no matter what the motivation of the person hiring them? Or will they refuse services to people with goals or motivations they consider immoral? Do they have any opinions on other NGOs and nations, or are they indifferent? Are they only in it for the cash, or do they have some greater motivation? Give us something to work with other than "They have guns and will shoot those guns at other people for money". A lot of people here spent more than one day on their apps, you have apparently spent a few minutes unless you're a really slow typer. This post itself is longer than your entire app, and if you had looked at other apps here, they have multiple paragraphs of history. Your history is acceptable as a short [i]summary[/i] of a [i]section[/i] of the history seen in Aaron's app. If you want to join, you're going to need a much better app.