Welcome Tigre. :) I just saw the edit. It is heaps clearer now. Also.... Thanks for the submission Limey. I like both character designs a lot, but I have 2 concerns: 1) Bjorn's specialization is too similar to Seira's. She is able to use metal to create and enhance weapons. Though only limited to metal. There is also a Chrono with a weapon altering ability but it covers a larger range of weapons and the ability is not restricted to metal. Maybe you could consider a different alch-specs for Bjorn? Some suggestions I thought of (keeping to the smithing theme): [s]Weapon Augmentation (literally strengthening and weakening weapons)[/s] - sorry this ability is not allowed. Just clarified it. =( Super Human Strength (literally smashes through the ground) Fire Manipulation Fire Endowment (charges a weapon with elemental energy) Weakness Exploitation/Shattering Though to be honest... I was thinking possibly both siblings could have different forms of electric control e.g. bioelectric control, spark generation, etc. :) I mean divide and conquer! 2) I am not sure if the siblings can be fifth generation Asylums due to the mortality rates in AMRO. I think you could say that they either come from a long line of alchemists a la Don and Fiora, their parents were Alchemists like Lina or their parents were rogues. Alternatively you could avoid that altogether and say the kids were raised in the AMRO orphanage.