Nah man its totally fine, I saw it this way; If I throw out my overall idea for the character it'll give everyone an opportunity to see where I'm intending to go and give you two as GM to have an idea on what I'm trying to accomplish, I figured it would've needed to be tweaked down a bit for the start.

[b]Edit because I did not want to double post:[/b]

I made the changes, recheck them when you have time but no rush.