Hey, Derv - I appreciate the critique you gave on my [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/1234270]app[/url], and I've elaborated a little more into how Iosif was able to escape from Aratoht. As for the matter on Siame and slavery - no, I wasn't trying to directly implicate them in Iosif's enslavement, rather I was trying to suggest that he blames them for Jedrah's betrayal and giving the salarian an excuse to profiteer from the situation even more by having him sold nto slavery. Anyways, I've already got a note down and I'll probably throw another few in as things go along. Thanks for inviting me into this.