Full Name: Vultog 
Nicknames:None

Race: Orc-Elf

Gender: Male
Age: 18
Hair: Long flowing shoulder length black hair.
Skin: Light green.
Eyes: two different colors, the left eye being green and the right blood red.
Height: 6’4”
Weight: 160 lbs

Place of Birth: Vultog was born in the mountains, near a mining plant. In the village, race did not matter, only strength and camaraderie.

Appearance: While Vultog inherited his fighting spirit from his mother, he inherited his looks, at least in his face, from his father. His skin is light peach, with a green tint to the skin, in his mouth, he has two relatively small fangs. He is well built due to his mother’s training. His eyes are two different colors, his left eye being green and representing his father, while his right eye is red and represents his mother.

Occupation in the frontier forces: Diplomat, Guardian for Linara
Gear of choice: Vultog owns a sword named Fortune of the Gods. It is a large, serrated broadsword, almost the size of him, and was given for his bravery in war by his mother, the blade is constantly kept in a leather sheath that he carries, and is wrapped in cloth to prevent rust and other problems. Fortune of the Gods was a sword forged long ago, Only a simple short sword. As it was passed down through its ancestors, it was reforged and changed, going through many forms. When it reached Vultog's mother, it was given the form it has now. When it was passed down to Vultog, he did not change any aspect of it, deeming it perfect.
He wears a pair of leather pants, as well as a cloak to cover his face.

Positive Personality Traits: Can realize intentions and has a good set of morals, knowing who not to attack, and will help injured or people in trouble.
Negative Personality Traits: Attacks who he thinks may be evil.
Misc. Quirks: Enjoys the thrill of fighting trolls and other large creatures, if only for the danger it brings.
Likes: Fighting, killing bandits.
Dislikes: Spiders and Humans.
Hobbies: Enjoys sewing clothing in spare time, and taming animals.

Paired character: Linara(Strudel)
Connection with paired character: Vultog is a guardian for Linara, hired by her parents, after rescuing her from a bandit attack while she was traveling to the mining plant. 
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History: Vultog was born to an orcish mother and an elvish father. When he could only just walk his mother began training him to fight. When he had just begun speaking, his father taught him diplomatic and eloquent language. While he was young, he faced very little prejudice as a half orc. While there wasn't much prejudice against him, he was picked on for being weaker and smaller. This is where he met his best friend, Rokk'thar. They grew up together, even as Vultog became bigger and stronger than Rokk'thar. They remained friends even as they joined the guards for their village, training together and working for the same times for guarding the village. Tragedy came when an earthquake struck, shaking the mines nearby, and waking several nightmarish beasts, including towering spiders. He lost his best friend in this battle against the beasts, watching him being drained of all life. After this battle he left his village to become a vigilante protecting roads form bandits and such. It is here he met Linara, saving her and her carriage from a bandit ambush. After this, he was hired by her parents to protect her.

Alright, here is my first edit to the CS. if anything else needs fixing, tell me.