@rpg101 Heads up, post directed at your character

@Wired I like your little subplot there. I'll sometimes intercede in these and pick up an NPC, but not always. Sometimes it'll just be up to you. This is one of those occasions due to how much is going on. 

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Alright, my first post is finally up! How'd I do, GM? I tried my hardest to included nothing but observable facts, as I believe that's the gist of what were trying to do. :B
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Yeah it looks good. Remember I don't mind if you write from a perspective (like a dwarf's posts which obsessed over the vastness of the sky because he's lived underground his whole life). Just no verbatim thoughts or explicit feelings.