@rpg101 Nice post. I liked how you took the scene and put it in your character's perspective. That's a useful trick and something I often forget to do. @All Remember that if you're struggling for things to fit into your post without introspection that I DO NOT enforce post size limits so there is never any need to struggle. When you have nothing more to describe... stop. Often one paragraph posts are perfectly suitable. I don't have anything against long posts in particular, but I don't require them. I will have an encounter with the Queen and Loghain soon enough, but I kind of want Joras and his ward to split off before then so those two scenes happen concurrently rather than sequentially. That should speed things up.