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I'm here to give feedback and fuck bitches.And I'm all out of bitches... So...
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First of all, thanks so much for the advice and clarification for some things! I've gone through and edited some stuff. For easy access, here is what I have added/changed:
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Regarding Power Levels: Only really read the manga and it's been ages since I read about Hayate in anything so I was not aware of his skills there. In that case then, I guess the best comparison that comes to mind is that Ryuu is around the same level of non-kyuubi Naruto at the very beginning of shippuden. Meaning, most Jounin can kick his ass. And just to clarify, Ryuu does not have the potential of Naruto nor Sasuke. He doesn't get plot armor reincarnation.

Regarding Clan Relatives: "The two to three Uchiha in Gobi are not even aware of their heritage to the powerful clan. Though they have seen each other about the village and some have commented on their physical resemblance, such is the case in a village that offers pleasure. Ryuu is aware of the fact that he might be related to others in the village, but he simply does not care"

Regarding word choice: " His eyes remained in the same state of two tomoe, but the young man slowly and haphazardly became proficient with the basic abilities given by the Dojutsu."

Regarding Jutsu: Split the sword genjutsu into two. Tell me what ya think. 

Name: Sword Illusion Technique, Ken no sakkaku
Rank: D
Summary: With this technique, Ryuu is able to cast Genjutsu without handsigns. Rather he uses his sword’s movements to cast Genjutsu. The Genjutsu typically takes the form of altering an opponent’s depth perception.

Name: World of the Sword Technique, Ken no sekai
Rank: B
Summary: With this technique, Ryuu uses his sword to cast a powerful genjutsu. The genjutsu places the victim in an illusionary world. In this world, numerous blades are strewn upon the ground making it impossible to take a step without slicing one's feet. The greater danger is in the air. Butterflies with blades for wings quite nearly suffuse the air as they flit about. This genjutsu makes the victim feel as if their body under attack from a meat grinder. It follows the same rules as other genjutsu in regards to breaking free and lack of real world damage aside from mental.

Also edited Ken no Sepido to add further details to the time limit.
Name: Sword Speed, Ken no supīdo
Rank: B
Summary: Ryuu uses his chakra control and natural ability to enhance his speed beyond even that of the Shunshin. Used in conjunction with his sword, this ability is able to keep up with speeds of low-level Jounin. This is only usable for short periods of time. In order to prevent damage to his body, Ryuu is only capable of using this technique for twenty seconds at a time. There is a one minute period he has to wait until he can use it again unless it is a suicide run.

And finally, I added an Experimental Jutsu section in the CS. 
Experimental Jutsu
(These are jutsu that Ryuu is working on developing. A percentage is put showing how far he has to go until he is capable of using this jutsu in combat.)
Name: Blade of Wind, Kaze no Yaiba
Rank: A
Summary: This technique is a pinpoint slashing strike, where the user emits chakra from their fingertips and materializes it into an near invisible weapon that assaults the enemy in a gust of wind. 40%

Name: Blade of Hell, Jigoku no ha
Rank: A
Summary: This technique is the advanced form of Yoso Buredo (element blade). It adds both wind nature and fire nature to the blade which enhances the current attacking power immensely. This would also give the blade something of a ranged attack by using wind to force the fire off the blade. This would create intense blasts of fire when used to cover mid-close range. This technique has a long way to go as Ryuu has yet to even master Wind. 5%

Wind Mastery: Ryuu has been training the Wind element for a little over two months and is currently on the leaf cutting stage. He is currently able to cut a leaf about an eighth of the way through. Hence, most people will often seem him with a leaf in his hand if he is not doing more intensive training. He finds it frustrating that something is not coming easily to him for once. 10% 

Well, hope this is satisfactory! [/hider]