You could make more than one character if you could handle it. I sure hope you could though because if you're biting more than you can chew, you might not enjoy your meal. :)

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I can't wait for your CS, Derpestein :) Although everyone take note... I've mentioned this several times before, but gameplay mechanics have no place here. I don't mind a 'run & gun' soldier, but it'd have to be portrayed in a realistic light.

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Anyway Pete, after looking through your CS, I find a few problems. A very minor detail is the race bit. White refers to skin colour. I believe the term you're looking for is 'caucasian'. Plus, there's no point putting non-hispanic in if your character isn't hispanic. Unless of course, you're actually following some standard set by the American military, I might reconsider this opinion of mine.

Another thing would be the 'previous vocations' bit. It's not referring to previous jobs outside of military/paramilitary/police/security organisations. All those fields under service records refer to details within said organisations. However, I kinda like that bit. It's funny and shines some light in your character. You could leave it in if you want.

Also, I sure hope you know what your character's getting into, Pete. In being a member of the United States military, she's going to be looked down upon as the US sphere of influence is quickly deteriorating and so is their reputation. The US military has recently been downsized and is becoming more involved in domestic terrorism and disorder/instability problems than it ever was, troops being deployed all over the country to watch the borders, patrol disaster zones and disorderly places.

In fact, it's going to be worse for Carrie because there's going to be alot of Chinese and Asian influence in UNXIPU. Well, at least in the beginning, though I can't say what's going to happen to that later on.

But so far, I like the character. She's very realistically written. I know about the problems faced by women in the military. Sucks, but that's humanity for you. Consider her informally accepted. However, I'll give you time to respond to my feedback and edit your character. A few days max. Do tell me once she's ready and I'll add it into the accepted characters list.