[quote=Fallenreaper] I think I only went about 20 words over that... mainly due to Abigail flavor, as for Kurtis, Remmy, Jose, and Cash I think it might be best to sort of just delete them for now. I've told Aweena and think I mentioned it on the OOC that I don't plan on bring the Sentinels around this time, at least not for a while. It's easier to keep focus on 2 PCs, which I plan on bring Racheli in on this, a character fave of mine, but there's one problem. Since it's written by her, I can't see her detailing her past-even when forced-due to the fact I know her personality rather well since I've played her several times before. It never feels right or makes sense for her to unless someone pries in then its only as little as possible. (There's a reason for this!) I also thought it might be slightly more fun to reveal her history IC throughout the rp to the PCs that get to know her when I do intro her into Apoc. Currently I've got her history written up both post and after the infection which I aim on sending to both you and Aweena incase anything about it clashes with things in this new set up. Though while I can still do a narrative write up, I don't want to be penalized for her not wanting to go into her past, mainly early years before everything as she would put it 'went to shit'. (It's a touchy subject for her for many reasons.) Would it be alright to do this? [/quote] I wouldn't throw them away. Perhaps give them very succinct, short bios noting who they are affiliated with (Playable Characters or Organizations, I mean). If you want to hold off until you see an example of this feel free. I'll be doing it for a few of my people. By doing this you can expand later if you end up switching around (people could die) or otherwise just keep options open. How does this sound? We do plan on separating NPCs and Secondaries a bit. We're currently talking about what the narratives for Secondaries would be like, but it seems pretty solid that NPCs would be very brief snippets as/if relevant.